So people pee in pools
From perhaps the water and the flesh
The sight of spandex over certain parts…
The bladder and the prostate both awake
To turn some men to urinating fools
Ladies too let loose when it hits hard
No thought at all at where they are in space
And all the other bodies that have minds
(So fuck you what I mean go take a swim)
Though I can see myself in such a space
Avoiding all the looks that spell relieved…
Now I could tell my cats and they would know
A species that by instinct hides their waste
Evolving as we have we lost the need
An instinct first and foremost dribbled out…
Here closeness is defined by sharing pee
And think what we will do when in the sea.
great piece of writing sir.
Are sea creatures swimming in eons of their own pee ? Is that Primal Soup from which life evolved pee ? The thought makes me go pee-nuts ! If Genesis is correct are the oceans and seas God’s pee ?
Thanks for liking the poem! Current theories about the origin of life involve asteroids, but the idea of life started by taking a piss is interesting,